What I’m Trying To Say Is…

oh speak the silent whispers, through your amazing touch,
feed me every moment, with your fruit of ecstasy,
my most beautiful dreams, are paled by your eyes,
send me your tears, moisten my cheek for i cannot,

let me carry you across this river, be safe in my arms,
i only fly, when you are on the tip of my tongue,
inhale your sweet scent, and filled am i with all glory,
kiss your soft lips, lightning strikes me twice,

feel your whole body next to mine, hell freezes over,
a simple gaze at me, you pierce my innermost being,
you hold me till dawn, sunrise pales and shy’s away,
in sharing your secrets, songs don’t mean a thing.

i guess what i’m trying to say is,
you are my breath,
you are my motion,
you are my heaven.

20 Responses

  1. serenity says:

    The whole poem, the randomness of the rhythm is so beautifully coupled with the words of passion and love. The music you create in your words is so lovely….just lovely.

    Peace, joy and love you, dear friend.

  2. Amit says:

    Thank you serenity and thank you for always encouraging me! I am going to attempt to write some fresh and up to date ones soon! 🙂

  3. kavikim says:

    Such a blessing to read your poems! Well done babes for saying what you truly feel and being so strong to express it! The power of choice keeps it alive! Gwann bwoy! 😉 x x x

  4. Amit says:

    Awww thanks Kavikim, I can’t wait for the next lot of your poetry too!

  5. Nneka says:

    Amit, this is such a beautiful poem. Heartfelt. I love it.

  6. Amit says:

    Hey Nneka, awww thank you, I’m glad you liked it! 🙂

  7. oh my…this is wonderful…amazing writing!

  8. Amit says:

    Hi Cristina. Thank you so much, I’ve got your email too and I will be replying shortly! 🙂

  9. dumbdodi says:

    It really is one of your best I think. Great feel to poem, great passion and emotion which comes across beautifully and gracefully. Kudos to you Amit

  10. Amit says:

    Hey Radhika! Thank You! Judging by the comments I’m gonna find it tough to top this one but I’ll surely give it a go! 🙂

  11. Pam Nosworthy says:

    Amit, I was very moved by this poetic verse! You have very ‘Rumi-ish” qualities to your writing but with your own unique voice! May I send you a poem of mine on facebook?

    Blessings, Pam…God Bless you!

  12. Amit Sodha says:

    Hi Pam,

    Wow, to be compared with Rumi, now that is a benevolent compliment and I so thank you! Please do definitely send me your peotry! I would love to read it!!

    Go bless! xx

  13. skittles234 says:

    i love this poem! it’s so sensual, raw, and beautifully articulated! hot stuff! 😉 xx

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